How does evidence apply to title thesis? Concept introduced on 1st slide but different ideas elaborated on and supported through the rest. Tie these together.
Slight grammatical errors: open quotation on 4th slide, double negative (, & run on sentence.
Explain concepts more clearly before utilizing them in argument for reader’s purpose. Consider audience.
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